Feedback on Magazine Draft

Hello!

Following the previous post, below is a summary of the audience feedback I have acquired in order to guide me on what to improve or add on.

1. Add intriguing coverlines to capture a wider range of audience's attention (eg: behind-the-scenes of the film or exclusive interview with one of the main character's)
2. Change the font for the word 'kill' to a more daring and sinister font or add a blood splatter/ gun shot to entice the audience
3. Increase the exposure of the image and decrease the saturation to make the image fit the convention of the low key lighting of a thriller genre. 

I will be taking into consideration all 3 feedback but mainly focus on the first two comments as I think these will truly capture the eye of my target audience and successfully fit the conventions of a thriller/crime genre.

Nina 

01.03.18